I have written report about “Images of Indonesia”, and it has been corrected by my classmate, Inayah Chaerunnisa. Based on her point, she found that I’ve made some mistakes.
1. All paragraphs seem didn’t match to each other because I didn’t put any connective sentences.
2. There are some sentences that have words which are not fit to each other.
3. Misspelled word
4. Formatting paragraph (font style and alignment)
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Every day, things get expanded. One of the biggest things that rapidly expanded is knowledge, especially for technology, usually known as ICT (Information, Communication and Technology). As an example, ten years ago, there are many people who used type machine to type something, also telephone and mail to communicate with other people in other place – which is probably far. That might take a long time, especially if we’re using mail. Comparing to these days, with only rely on a hand phone or PC tablet, every thing are possible to be done in any minute.
Moreover, teenagers were the biggest consumers of those utilities – called gadgets. Based on the survey and short interviews I’ve done to high school students, can be proved that all of them –minimally– are using smart phone. Most of them, said the reason they use it is to ease communicating. But, there’s also some respondents said they use it just because to following the recent trends.
On the other hand, gadgets are also everything to some of those respondents. They said that gadgets affect their life a lot. They confessed that they can’t live without their gadget surrounds them. Behind those reasons, we could simply conclude that they hardly ever socialize with anyone, directly. They only socialized by IM or sending message by Short Message Service (SMS).
As a conclusion, all we have to do is minimize the usage of our gadgets. In my point of view, this less using gadget (which is using electricity also) could save our energy. Besides, the radiations from the gadget could endanger our eyes. In the end, only use your gadgets if it is necessary, and do not over using.
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