I interviewed my classmates on what they do during their free time, their favorite sport and their favorite food and drinks. In this report you will not only find out what people eat, drink or do during their free time, but you will also find out what people these days are like and how supportive of their country they really are.
Now let’s talk about food, about 60% of my classmates like foreign food and drinks like cinnamon roll, sushi, pasta, coca-cola, etc., while the other 40% likes Indonesian food such as, traditional fried rice, sate Padang, teh botol, opor ayam, etc. These results alone can tell us that most Indonesians rather eat fast food rather than Indonesian food; for example, if we go to the mall we often eat KFC, A&W, Hoka Hoka Bento, Sushi and other foreign food.
What do teenagers do during their free time? Well, most of the people I interviewed usually sleep or play computer during their free time, although, some people prefer texting or playing with their blackberry. We can see that technology plays a great part in our lives and no one can live without them. We can also see that teenagers these days have a lazy lifestyle, only a handful of people exercise, plant trees, or clean their neighborhood during their free time and I think, that quality should be planted in every Indonesians.
As for sports, almost all of my classmates like foreign sports like baseball, chess, football, etc. From my interview, no one likes Indonesian sports like, congklak, etc. From this interview we can conclude that Indonesian teenagers follow western traditions rather than Indonesia traditions. I think this kind of attitude should be removed from our heads and let Indonesian culture fill it back in. By reeducating our way of life we can improve this country and what better way to do that then doing Indonesian things and eating Indonesian food.
your grammar is good and almost nothing's wrong with your article. but, your report has written like you were talking to someone or audience. so it's not really a written report or formal report but it seems like a speech report or an informal report. and then, your topic is too common. even it's such a simple topic, but you have to be more creative. if you don't have any idea, you can make it more detail and focus into one thing.
ReplyDeletethat's all, thankyou ;)